On Tursday we had cross-contry we had to wait a long time so we can ran and we finly got to run i came 5th place in the cross-contry . it was fun nen i got a go to run the year 6 got to go t Thest and then the year got to go 2 so they can go and the year 3 got to go after we go A go and after that the years 4 got to go and the year 5 got to go and that was us.
hi george i really like how you said how you feelt,I think you done a great job at saying what place you came and all the year groups,
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